Editing & Feedback Services

Real edits. Honest feedback. Built for writers who want their work to hit harder.

If you’ve got a piece that’s close—but not quite landing—
I’ll help you strip it down, sharpen it, and find what’s really underneath.

I’m a writer first. That’s why my edits aren’t performative or precious—I know what it’s like to sit with a draft that’s not quite working and to need someone who sees the real thing inside the mess.

If you want clarity, sharpness, and a ruthless-but-loving edit that makes your work better without sanding off your voice—this is for you.

Gut Check ($75)

Quick, high-impact feedback on one short piece (up to 1,500 words).
You’ll get a marked-up file with direct notes + a short letter with your next steps.
$0.03/word for longer pieces.

Deep Dive ($150+)

Developmental edit for essays or chapters (up to 3,000 words).
You’ll get an editorial letter and margin comments that dig into structure, voice, pacing, and possibilities.
$0.05/word for longer pieces.

Final Polish ($100)

Line edit for clean-up and clarity on work that’s almost there.
Focus on flow, voice consistency, and final refinements (up to 2,000 words).
$0.045/word for longer pieces.

Add-On: Zoom Session

Want to talk it through?
Add a 30-minute Zoom call to any edit for $50.
We’ll walk through the biggest takeaways, stuck spots, and next steps.
Bring your questions, your doubts, your messy drafts—I’ll bring my red pen and clarity.

(Just mention in the booking email if you want to add a call.)

Let’s make your words work harder.

Editing doesn’t have to be painful. It should be clarifying, energizing, and make your work stronger—without crushing your soul in the process. If you’re ready to sharpen your writing and build momentum, let’s do this.

To book:
Email me at lori [at] loriwriteswords.com with your draft, word count, and what you’re looking for. I’ll reply with a timeline and payment info. No forms, no fluff.

The Fine Print

  • One round of feedback included per edit. If you want a second look or a revision check, we’ll scope that separately.

  • Pricing is per project, based on word count. You’ll get a clear quote before we begin—no surprises.

  • Full payment required to book your spot

  • Rush rates available on request

  • No guarantees of publication. I’ll help you make the piece stronger, sharper, and more you—but I can’t promise how editors or agents will respond.

  • 48-hour notice required for cancellation/refund eligibility

  • I reserve the right to decline projects that aren’t a good fit. No hard feelings—it’s about making sure we’re aligned.